Lyric Poem · Love
The Secret
Our wedding song sounds older now,
the photos soft with age,
but you still get top billing, love,
on every single page.
They ask us for the secret, love,
and here's the honest clue:
each morning I propose again —
and you still say "I do."
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Quick facts
- Poem
- The Secret
- Poet
- The QuillOak Editors
- Length
- 8 lines
- Form
- Lyric Poem, Rhyming Poems
- Themes
- Love
Craft notes
How this poem works
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- Shape
- 8 lines · 2 quatrains
- End rhyme
- ABCB in every stanza — ballad rhyme — only lines 2 and 4 chime.
- Line length
- Consistent with common metre. Alternating eight- and six-syllable lines — the hymn stanza (8.6.8.6), the most-used quatrain in English verse.
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Original QuillOak text. Personal sharing is permitted; other reuse requires permission.
- Author record
- The QuillOak Editorstoday
- Source record
- QuillOak originalThe Secret, authored for QuillOak by The Quillery
- Display decision
- Full text · United States · reviewed 2026-07-18
- Publication record
- Not recorded in the imported source
- Text fingerprint
- SHA-256 ed27dc36bb551cf4…
- Editorial handling
- Whitespace and stanza breaks normalized for web display; no material wording change recorded.
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