Lyric Poem · Love
Slow Dance in the Kitchen
We never learned the proper steps,
we sway more than we dance,
the dinner's burning on the stove,
the dog looks on, askance —
but somewhere between sink and fridge,
your head against my chest,
I figured out what music's for.
This. This. Forget the rest.
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Quick facts
- Poem
- Slow Dance in the Kitchen
- Poet
- The QuillOak Editors
- Length
- 8 lines
- Form
- Lyric Poem, Rhyming Poems
- Themes
- Love, For Her
Craft notes
How this poem works
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- Shape
- 8 lines · 2 quatrains
- Line length
- Common metre. Alternating eight- and six-syllable lines — the hymn stanza (8.6.8.6), the most-used quatrain in English verse.
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Original QuillOak text. Personal sharing is permitted; other reuse requires permission.
- Author record
- The QuillOak Editorstoday
- Source record
- QuillOak originalSlow Dance in the Kitchen, authored for QuillOak by The Quillery
- Display decision
- Full text · United States · reviewed 2026-07-18
- Publication record
- Not recorded in the imported source
- Text fingerprint
- SHA-256 17a3010db60bbe20…
- Editorial handling
- Whitespace and stanza breaks normalized for web display; no material wording change recorded.
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