Lyric Poem · Nature
Impromptu on Mrs. Riddell’s Birthday
by Robert Burns
OLD Winter, with his frosty beard,
Thus once to Jove his prayer preferred:
“What have I done of all the year,
To bear this hated doom severe?
My cheerless suns no pleasure know;
Night’s horrid car drags, dreary slow;
My dismal months no joys are crowning,
But spleeny English hanging, drowning.
“Now Jove, for once be mighty civil.
To counterbalance all this evil;
Give me, and I’ve no more to say,
Give me Maria’s natal day!
That brilliant gift shall so enrich me,
Spring, Summer, Autumn, cannot match me.”
“’Tis done!” says Jove; so ends my story,
And Winter once rejoiced in glory.
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- Poem
- Impromptu on Mrs. Riddell’s Birthday
- Poet
- Robert Burns
- Length
- 16 lines
- Form
- Lyric Poem
- Themes
- Nature, Winter, Autumn
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- 16 lines · 2 octaves
- Line length
- Lines run 8-9 syllables (median 9). No single length dominates, which is normal once elision and contraction are in play.
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- Author record
- Robert Burns1759–1796
- Source record
- PoetryDBImpromptu on Mrs. Riddell’s Birthday by robert-burns, PoetryDB transcription
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