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Twelve Years In

by The QuillOak Editors

1Twelve years in, and I still check

2which way you'll turn your head,

3still save the crossword's hardest clue

4for you to solve in bed.

5We've learned each other's weather now,

6the storms, the clearing skies,

7and still, some ordinary Tuesday,

8you take me by surprise.

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Quick facts

Poem
Twelve Years In
Poet
The QuillOak Editors
Length
8 lines
Form
Rhyming Poems, Lyric Poem
Themes
Love, For Her

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Shape
8 lines · 2 quatrains
End rhyme
ABCB in every stanza — ballad rhyme — only lines 2 and 4 chime.
Line length
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The QuillOak Editorstoday
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QuillOak originalTwelve Years In, authored for QuillOak by The Quillery
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Full text · United States · reviewed 2026-07-18
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