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Ghazal · Love

Ghazal of the Open Door

by The QuillOak Editors

1All winter I have left a lamp beside the door.

2The cold comes in, but so might you, beside the door.

3They say to want this little is a kind of wealth —

4then call me rich, who keeps a chair beside the door.

5The road forgets the travelers it carried off;

6the house remembers, and waits there beside the door.

7Some pray to heaven, some to luck, and some to time.

8I say your name once, like a prayer, beside the door.

9Call the poet foolish, then — she will not move.

10Quill keeps her watch, her one repair, beside the door.

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Quick facts

Poem
Ghazal of the Open Door
Poet
The QuillOak Editors
Length
10 lines
Form
Ghazal
Themes
Love, Missing You, Hope

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Shape
10 lines · 5 couplets
Line length
Mostly 12-syllable lines (hexameter length).
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Full text · United States · reviewed 2026-07-18
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