Ghazal · Love
Ghazal of the Open Door
1All winter I have left a lamp beside the door.
2The cold comes in, but so might you, beside the door.
3They say to want this little is a kind of wealth —
4then call me rich, who keeps a chair beside the door.
5The road forgets the travelers it carried off;
6the house remembers, and waits there beside the door.
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Quick facts
- Poem
- Ghazal of the Open Door
- Poet
- The QuillOak Editors
- Length
- 10 lines
- Form
- Ghazal
- Themes
- Love, Missing You, Hope
Craft notes
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- Shape
- 10 lines · 5 couplets
- Line length
- Mostly 12-syllable lines (hexameter length).
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- Author record
- The QuillOak Editorstoday
- Source record
- QuillOak originalGhazal of the Open Door, authored for QuillOak by The Quillery
- Display decision
- Full text · United States · reviewed 2026-07-18
- Publication record
- Not recorded in the imported source
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- SHA-256 ab0e642239469fe7…
- Editorial handling
- Whitespace and stanza breaks normalized for web display; no material wording change recorded.
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